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The frank, unadorned tone of the writing delivers an effective slap
in the face for those expecting an over-cheesed, condescending
depiction of teen issues. The refreshing lack of grandiosity makes
this novel grittily identifiable. The concept of finding one's
self by abandoning everything familiar and discovering a new basic
resolve toward life is inherent in this story and is easily
recognizable for anyone who has recovered from depression. This
novel strikes home with hard-hitting truths and emotions -- without
all the extra fluff often accompanying such plots. In short, this
story does not try to explain itself. It just is.
Associated Content
Dayna Clay is a masterful act of portraiture. McComas never lets
the reader forget that Dayna is a bisexual woman, yet her humanity
and her universal struggle to recover her damaged spirit make
her a character to whom anyone can relate. The character-driven
Unplugged stands as a frank personal contemplation as well as a timely
reflection on youth culture in the post-grunge world.
f-news
School of the Art Institute of Chicago student monthly
McComas combines with two other performers to present a visceral
live version of his work. He does a marvelous job of evoking the
mood of chaos and adoration that marks a rock concert, but does
even better at getting inside Dayna Clay's head. As a reading,
Unplugged works extremely well. There is enough of a taste of
the material to pique your interest in the book. As a theatrical
piece, the show is solid. Chicago actress Heather Mell inhabits
Dayna, bringing out both the pain and the hope that make up the
character. I give credit to McComas for presenting Dayna's "hit"
songs; they fit the material well. It's always a minefield trying
to create your own history of rock'n'roll. For every high like
"Velvet Goldmine," there is a more than shuddering low, like "The
Life of Christopher Gaines." Unplugged works because, in the end,
it isn't about rock'n'roll, but about personal demons and learning
to deal with those demons. And that makes Dayna Clay's story worth
exploring.
Door County (WI) Advocate
McComas writes about depression without bringing down the reader.
He writes about spirituality and the healing power of nature,
and it is magical and real, not boring and detached. And he writes
about sexuality -- bisexuality -- without it being a gimmick or
heavy-handed....This is not a typical recovery story with support
groups, self-help books, emotional therapy sessions and an embrace
of victimization. Instead, Dayna finds her way through by sheer
will, through the kindness of strangers and by connecting to the
grace and tenacity of life itself. In this time of militant identity
politics, it's delightfully surprising that a heterosexual man
wrote such a strong bisexual female character....Drawing on his
performance-art roots, McComas has also turned the book into a
cool and compelling performance piece.
Chicago Free Press
Rainbow Media Group
Paul McComas has brought acclaim to Evanston through this book,
Unplugged; through his coast-to-coast performance tour; through his work
with numerous mental-health organizations; and through his message.
Listen to his words: that out of diversity can come hope, the
path to healing.
Hon. Lorraine F. Morton
Mayor, City of Evanston, IL
An original, passionate, witty work that confronts the conundrums
of transformation....The earnest, principled Unplugged bridges the gap between stripped-down rock music and theatrical
storytelling.
Critic's Choice
Chicago Reader
In his debut novel, Unplugged, author Paul McComas delights the reader's senses, "strutting
his stuff" right alongside his fictional leading lady--bisexual
rock-n-roll star Dayna Clay -- allowing the music of his prose
to strum its way into our hearts....McComas's writing is visceral.
The Badlands become interesting, even beautiful. We see and feel
the dirt hills which turn to slippery mud after rain but are still
effortlessly navigated by the indigenous, protected bighorns.
McComas is as capable of conveying emotional intensity as he is
humor, and so he keeps us turning the pages. Men and women alike
will fall in love with Dayna and will be sorry when the story
ends."
Book of the Month
Rapid River Literary Journal
McComas goes far beyond the conventional reading and book signing:
he acts out the scenes he describes, using props, gymnastic agility,
and the easygoing charm of a street performer...I must admit that
the idea of a lesbian sex scene written by a straight man brought
up an automatic gag reflex. But Paul McComas either avoided or
was immune to the several flavors of weird that straight men can
project onto lesbians, and the romantic parts of the book could
well pass as woman-written...A really cool protagonist, Dayna
Clay could well provide a role model for troubled young women,
and Unplugged certainly beats The Well of Loneliness in that department...McComas'
well-crafted novel offers young Queers hope and second chances.
He would love to see Unplugged brought to the screen. If the producers
don't chicken out on the most interesting parts, it would sure
be something to see.
Out in the Mountains (LGBT monthly)
Burlington, VT
After Kurt Cobain killed himself in 1994, Chicago writer Paul
McComas devoted himself to suicide prevention. His first novel,
Unplugged, imagines a Cobain-like musician who gets an unexpected
second chance...McComas' writing is intensely emotional, and in
this case there's something to be said for having your heart in
the right place.
The Rake (Twin Cities)
Chicago rocker Dayna Clay's high-stakes struggle with depression
and abuse leads not to suicide but to a journey of self-discovery.
A tale of healing and hope, Unplugged is getting the word out that there is help in the fight against
depression.
Chicago Tribune
McComas chronicles depression without depressing the reader, and
he shows a deep understanding of the way alienated young adults
can feel marginalized by the church and far from God...Dayna Clay's
journey to recovery and faith is absorbing, and her growing ability
to confront and deal with her illness is admirable. Learning to
trust and accept both her strengths and her weaknesses, she returns
from the wilderness - literally and figuratively - ready to embrace
life again.
"Books of the Year"
Christian Century
Very well written, Unplugged is also a darned good tale: enjoyable,
uplifting and inspiring. One of the best [novels] of the year.
"Writer's Corner
Educational TV-20 (S. Florida)
Unplugged is unexpectedly poignant and engaging. I was pleasantly
surprised by the depth and true-to-life nature of the writing;
it doesnt call attention to itself at any point -- instead, the
flow is easy to get into and easier to get caught up in. The dialogue
is simple and effective, and the tone is hard-hitting and to the
point. The author demonstrates immense familiarity with and knowledge
of the Badlands and the surrounding area. The book also parallels
traditional Lakota beliefs: Dayna begins to experience nature
as a living creature thats conscious of her presence. Her growing
connection to the land and its healing power -- evident in every
chapter, and told in a realistic, believable manner -- echoes
the religious reverence surrounding this sacred region. The novel
strikes home with hard-hitting emotions, yet without the extra
fluff of introspection. This book doesnt attempt to explain itself;
it lets the reader come to his or her own conclusions. Its up-lifting
without seeming cheesy, and the issues explored -- depression,
suicide, bisexuality, child abuse, religion -- are discussed so
frankly that anyone of any orientation, nationality or background
can find something in common with Dayna. The characters are so
well-developed and realistic that at no time did I have to humor
them by thinking, Well, its a book; Ill have to let that go.
Ive tried to find something I could criticize about this novel,
but it is a book of singular rightness.
The Lakota Journal
weekly newspaper of the Lakota Sioux tribal nation
Paul McComas' debut novel Unplugged deftly navigates a woman's heroic journey through the dark corners
of her own mind. The book can be enjoyed as an adventure story,
but more than that, McComas brilliantly illuminates his heroine's
complex inner world and the wild, lonely landscape that she allows
to transform her.
"Critics' Choice"
Milwaukee Shepherd-Express
McComas is an author/musician/performer extraordinaire with two
published books under his belt and a tattoo of a bighorn sheep
on his hip.
Lawrence University Lawrentian
Appleton, WI
GUESS WHAT? Unplugged has received Critic's Choice/Recommended Reading designations
from the Milwaukee Shepherd-Express (Nov. 2002), Christian Century Magazine (Dec. 2002) and the Seattle Post-Intelligencer (Apr. 2003).

A fabulous story, beautifully and intricately written, that will
appeal to those who value taking the time in their lives not only
to read, but to read through to the underlying message.
"Inner Views"
WNN-AM 1470 (South Florida)
Unplugged is the gripping story of a suicidal young rock star who learns
to use nature to help herself heal. One can't help feeling as
if protagonist Dayna Clay is a real person. Paul McComas has much
to offer: music, drama -- and a book that has 'screenplay' written
all over it.
College News
I read Unplugged with excitement and appreciation. This profound
story of personal transformation touched me throughout, from its
rich images and affirmations of God to its heartfelt critique
of rigidity in the guise of religion -- to its depiction [via
the character "Drake"] of the strength of a geezer like me!
C. Joseph Sprague
United Methodist Church Bishop
author of Affirmations of A Dissenter
This superbly crafted novel offers an unusual contemporary protagonist
and a plot thats anything but canned. Unplugged tells of a rocker
who departs from the music world, setting out for parts unknown
and ending up in South Dakota. Her search for solitude and healing
may unexpectedly lead to a career she cant shake in this moving
story.
Midwest Book Review
Its a sad truth that there are too many teens and twentysomethings
who suffer from mental illness, which makes this a book they need
to read. In fact, it should be required reading for all senior
high school students, though some frank writing about bisexuality
may put off more conservative learning institutions. Unplugged is the dramatic story of Dayna Clay, a jaded alternative musician
who escapes to the Badlands after an unsuccessful suicide attempt.
Once there, away from the world that adores her, she changes her
identity, attempts to cure her depression and tries to make a
new life for herself, though her old personality is still shadowing
her every move. She quickly finds that these changes may be just
what the doctor ordered, but they may not be enough to help her
deal with the fastballs fate is about to throw her way. Paul McComas
has a good grip on issues of sexuality, sexual abuse and mental
illness, and he refuses to pull any punches. His story not only
serves as an inspiration to those dealing with the same problems
as Dayna, but it may also change the way other people think of
them. Combine that with a remarkably realistic plot, and you have
a book well worth reading.
www.fearlessbooks.com
Unplugged is tender, courageous and real. The interview with Dayna [Chapter
8] is brilliant...Author Paul McComas knows the story he tells,
giving it a reality that can't be dismissed as fiction.
Milwaukee Journal Sentinel
columnist Bill Janz
Paul McComas writes as all good fiction writers should: straight
from the heart. His prose navigates the dark crevices of clinical
depression as deftly as his heroine masters her newly chosen terrain.
Inspired by a personal battle, the author transforms his own experiences
into a work of fiction that provides hope for anyone who has been
affected by depression.
Pioneer Press (Chicago suburbs)
As Dayna Clay's relationship with the Badlands deepens and she
learns to respect and revere nature, her understanding of herself
and her life become more profound as well. Away from the spotlight
she is able to reflect on her childhood of abuse, her unhealthy
relationships, and her misguided fear and anger. In Unplugged, McComas captures the volatile internal struggle to come to terms
with the past, to understand the present and to accept that the
future cannot be predicted or held at bay.
Evanston RoundTable
Unplugged moves you forcibly through its heroine's emotional quagmire,
pulling no punches and abstaining from armchair diagnosis. This
story screams truth through a megawatt amplifier.
UR Chicago Magazine
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